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My Untranslatable Novel

Editorial by Vanina Marsot

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PARIS: I grew up bilingual in Los Angeles: the world around me spoke English, but my French father and Egyptian mother spoke French to each other, and to understand what they were saying, I had to learn it.  Comparing the sinuousness of French versus the steely directness of English, I grew up obsessed with the differences between the two languages, mulling over expressions that don’t translate, reflecting on the way each language seems to express something missing in the other. As I translate animated French TV series into English for a living, I get a lot of practice figuring out how teenage monsters, talking panda bears, and transforming super heroes should sound. But what interests me is more complex than the admittedly fun task of translating prepubescent witticisms, so I wrote my first novel, Foreign Tongue, about it.

In order to write a novel about the differences between French and (American) English, and by extension, between French culture and American culture, I chose to make my heroine an accidental translator, a bilingual woman who runs away to Paris (the advantages of dual nationality), and happens into an under-the-table freelance job translating a mysterious erotic novel. That seemed like an intriguing premise, given the romantic stereotypes we have about the French. That the erotic novel is purple, grandiose, and badly written seemed like an opportunity to play around not only with language and translation, but with the words everyone wants to know in a foreign language: dirty words, slang. Plus, they’re funny.

As I was writing it, I noticed there weren’t any novels that addressed my particular pet idea. There are lots of books about people moving to France, but they tend to be written by outsiders looking in: people entranced or repelled, caught up in the humor or frustration, privilege or disadvantage of being a foreigner in France. The French, they are so: puzzling, frustrating, intriguing, annoying, rude, smelly, precise, chic, and/or (insert your adjective here). But a bilingual woman is both an insider and an outsider.

Funny, then, that it turns out my novel seems to be untranslatable, at least into the other language it is about, French.
foreigntongueThere’s a lot of French in my book. I think and hope it’s written so that even if you never studied the language, you can still understand what’s going on in the French passages, which are commented upon in English by my narrator. But here’s the crux of the matter: the French phrases and expressions in the book are dissected in English; that is, understood and parsed through English.  So, though the novel is in English (the protagonist), there’s a necessary tension with French, the antagonist. If you translate everything into French, the tension is gone. You’d have to convey that the French-language voice is that of a bilingual American, who is commenting on the French language; so, you’d read a French voice puzzling over odd French phrases — in French! Perhaps a really good literary translator could do this, but I’m not sure how.

“This is not a problem,” my French cousin said. “All you have to do is change all the French into English and all the English into French.” He hasn’t read my book, as his English isn’t very good, but unfortunately, he’s wrong. What he’s suggesting means writing an entirely different book, from the point of view of a bilingual, but native French person commenting on the foibles and eccentricities of the English language. It’s a nice idea, but it’s not the book I wrote. Not even close.

Here’s the interesting thing about being bilingual: deep down, you’re more in one camp than the other, even if the difference is slight. My mother tongue is English. I write in English, from inside English, and even when I don’t use it much, it’s how my brain thinks. I can get inside French, often I think and dream in it, but it’s not as seamless, and sometimes I can see the gaps in my own knowledge: the concepts I understand but still feel foreign, that make me feel not quite French enough.  Every once in a while, I’m even baffled by ideas that seem so alien they might as well be UFOs. I can write about French, but from my English point of view.

“I think it’s untranslatable,” said the Hungarian translator, who translates into both English and French.  She could be right, but Latvia bought the rights for translation — apparently they buy and translate everything, those Latvians, and this knowledge makes me want to buy airfare to Riga.

“What would you call it in French, if you had to translate it?” asked the retired French journalist at a dinner party in Paris. The title of my novel translates perfectly into French, and anyone who claims to speak both languages would understand this right away. I was jet-lagged and cranky, but my mother didn’t raise rude children, so I paused and exchanged a baffled look with our bilingual hostess.

Langue étrangère,” I said.

“No, no!” he snapped, giving me an impatient look. “You see, in French, langue,” and here he stuck his tongue out at me and pointed at it with his finger. “Langue in French, it means not only language, but also the tongue. There is a double meaning that does not exist in English.”

I realized this Frenchman was trying to enlighten me about my own language.

“It’s the exact same thing in English,” I said. He scowled and looked away.

When I wrote and told my parents, my father used a French expression: “Il a manqué une occasion de se taire.” He missed an opportunity to keep his mouth shut. In French, it’s elegant and cutting. In English, it’s awkward and dull — perhaps because we miss opportunities to do something; we may understand the notion of a missed opportunity not to do something, but we don’t have a phrase for it. That’s why I wrote my book, but maybe that’s what makes it untranslatable into French.

Vanina Marsot is the author of Foreign Tongue. Visit her online at www.vaninamarsot.com

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11 Comments

  1. Posted February 5, 2010 at 3:58 am | Permalink

    “Il a manqué une occasion de se taire.”

    “He missed the chance to hold his tongue,” Ms. Marsot. English isn’t necessarily awkward and dull…

  2. Posted February 5, 2010 at 4:21 am | Permalink

    As an American fluent in French — I’ve dreamed in it — I appreciate the complexity of your experience, and definitely want to read your book. Merci!

  3. Suzanne
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 5:05 am | Permalink

    Delightful article! Thank you!

  4. Jehanne
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 7:38 am | Permalink

    Ms. Marsot, you are so right, but it’s so hard to get that concept across to those who are not bilingual. I have the same experience with Arabic and French (I am also of Egyptian heritage; in fact, we met briefly at my brother’s wedding in L.A. 20 years ago), and everything you discussed resonates with me. Perhaps not every book is *meant* to be translated–one way to broaden people’s horizons, perhaps? But there will always be those, in any culture, who refuse to be opened up. Looking forward to reading your novel.

  5. Jehanne
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 7:39 am | Permalink

    Oops, I meant to say I have the same experience with Arabic and English! :-)

  6. John Warren
    Posted February 5, 2010 at 1:29 pm | Permalink

    This reminds me a lot of a play I wrote in college as an honors thesis–the play is about the conflict in early California between the Mexican/Spanish residents of Santa Barbara who are losing their position in society, the American/anglos coming into power, and the native Americans whose culture is disappearing. Much of the play involves also the interplay and obstacles of language, it’s written mostly in Spanish but some characters speak only English, and their is a smattering of Chumash as well. This is probably the main reason it was never performed. Though maybe eventually I’ll get around to turning it into a screenplay–everyone in LA has to have a screenplay!
    I enjoy translation, I recently translated a detective story from Spanish into English, and one of the main philosophical challenges I find is how much to remain utterly faithful to the original and how much to alter to fit the language and culture of the new language. For me it’s about 60/40 but it varies a bit from piece to piece.

  7. Gus
    Posted February 6, 2010 at 8:58 am | Permalink

    Sorry, Bruce but english is awkward and dull in many instances. Ms. Marsot, in her example, is correct. “He missed the chance to hold his tongue” just isn’t as chic or nuanced as the french version. I can think of several others. Even English names are more dull, lyrically speaking. Take your own name for example. Not pretty.

  8. GnT
    Posted February 9, 2010 at 4:51 pm | Permalink

    “He should have kept his trap shut”? Perhaps Ms Marsot’s father would have said “Nobody could accuse him of cunnilingus” – we don’t know. It all depends on the character of Ms Marsot’s dad: is he, as she implies, elegant and witty? or laconic? or straight-talking?

    Would an english speaker ever say “He missed the chance to hold his tongue”? Because the translator is familiar with both langues/tongues, there is une grande tentation to make a literary translation literal.

  9. Donn
    Posted February 11, 2010 at 10:30 am | Permalink

    I find myself irresistably enchanted by the lyrically soaring qualities of the name “Gus.”

    So chic, so mysterious … Is it a bodily fluid? A structural element of a bridge? Or an ignorant, braying jackass? The suspense’ll kill ya!

  10. Posted February 14, 2010 at 10:19 pm | Permalink

    A really interesting article. I’d argue that Englis has its pety, too, though.

    I’d also like to see someone define an “English” name.

    Anyway, I think there are some wonderful English phrasings that in French would fall flat. The comment cuts both ways.

    Some people need to be careful they don’t open their mouths and prove it.

  11. Posted December 15, 2012 at 12:50 am | Permalink

    What a fascinating article! As a bilingual novelist myself–in French and English too–I totally relate to Vanina Marsot’s experience. It can be hard to explain to people what it feels like to be between the two, and as a writer it’s even more so, and I’ll be looking forward to reading her book. I’ve written about it myself in an essay , The Language of Astonishment-freely available athttp://languageofastonishment.pressbooks.com/ (it starts off as a meditation on Andrei Makine’s wonderful novel Le testament français, which coins the phrase ‘the language of astonishment’ for the strange hybrid that is the bilingual tongue of the bilingual writer)

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